From 2dba38136a9f271d3b77bf7cd7d46453e804e4a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Mervill <mervills.email@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 21 Oct 2022 11:47:09 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Clarify some item descriptions in the uplink menu (#12040)

* clarify some descriptions in the uplink menu

* review
---
 .../Catalog/Fills/Backpacks/duffelbag.yml     |  7 +++----
 .../Prototypes/Catalog/uplink_catalog.yml     | 20 +++++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/Fills/Backpacks/duffelbag.yml b/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/Fills/Backpacks/duffelbag.yml
index 5474573193..3e12e20cf2 100644
--- a/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/Fills/Backpacks/duffelbag.yml
+++ b/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/Fills/Backpacks/duffelbag.yml
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
   parent: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicateMedicalBundle
   id: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicateFilledMedical
   name: syndicate surgical duffel bag
-  description: "A large duffel bag for holding extra medical supplies - this one seems to be designed for holding surgical tools."
+  description: A large duffel bag containing a full suite of surgical tools.
   components:
   - type: StorageFill
     contents:
@@ -149,8 +149,7 @@
 - type: entity
   parent: ClothingBackpackDuffelClown
   id: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicateCostumeClown
-  name: clown costume duffel bag
-  description: "Contains a complete Clown outfit."
+  suffix: syndicate
   components:
   - type: Tag
     tags: [] # ignore "WhitelistChameleon" tag
@@ -167,7 +166,7 @@
   parent: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicateBundle
   id: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicatePyjamaBundle
   name: syndicate pyjama duffel bag
-  description: "Contains 3 syndicate pyjamas."
+  description: Contains 3 pairs of syndicate pyjamas and 3 plushies for the ultimate sleepover.
   components:
   - type: StorageFill
     contents:
diff --git a/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/uplink_catalog.yml b/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/uplink_catalog.yml
index 02844149e4..bfa36edccd 100644
--- a/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/uplink_catalog.yml
+++ b/Resources/Prototypes/Catalog/uplink_catalog.yml
@@ -366,6 +366,7 @@
 
 - type: listing
   id: UplinkToolbox
+  description: A full compliment of tools for the mechanically inclined traitor. Includes a pair of insulated combat gloves, syndicate gas mask and a shoulder holster.
   productEntity: ToolboxSyndicateFilled
   cost:
     Telecrystal: 2
@@ -374,6 +375,7 @@
 
 - type: listing
   id: UplinkSyndicateJawsOfLife
+  description: A combined prying and cutting tool. Useful for entering the station or its departments.
   productEntity: SyndicateJawsOfLife
   cost:
     Telecrystal: 2
@@ -534,14 +536,6 @@
   categories:
   - UplinkMisc
 
-- type: listing
-  id: UplinkRevolverCapGun
-  productEntity: RevolverCapGun
-  cost:
-    Telecrystal: 4
-  categories:
-  - UplinkMisc
-
 - type: listing
   id: UplinkCigarettes
   productEntity: CigPackSyndicate
@@ -610,6 +604,14 @@
 
  # Pointless
 
+- type: listing
+  id: UplinkRevolverCapGun
+  productEntity: RevolverCapGun
+  cost:
+    Telecrystal: 4
+  categories:
+  - UplinkPointless
+
 - type: listing
   id: UplinkSyndicateStamp
   productEntity: RubberStampSyndicate
@@ -647,6 +649,8 @@
 - type: listing
   id: UplinkCostumeClown
   productEntity: ClothingBackpackDuffelSyndicateCostumeClown
+  name: clown costume duffel bag
+  description: Contains a complete Clown outfit. Includes PDA and service radio.
   cost:
     Telecrystal: 4
   categories: